A Paragraph of Writing

12/22/14
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“Hello,” said Bob.

“Hi,” said Billy.

“Welcome to Ohio,”

“Thank you. How are you?”

“Fine thank you.”

 

Do you think this paragraph is written well?

Comment yes or no and why.

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2 Comments

  • Guy the Dad

    awesome! I think the conversation is clever because it has very little back-story and gets right to the point. I like dialog that moves fast, just like in real life. Well done!

    12/22/14 – 4:00 pm

  • Kyle Romick

    I think the paragraph is written with few dialogue tags and it is kind of interesting to wonder how billy and bob know each other. It kind of makes you wonder why they are talking too.

    12/22/14 – 7:07 pm

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